A Villanelle With Lines From Yeats
Added back in at the discretion of the [still somewhat disgruntled] poet. A Villanelle with Lines from Yeats All things change to fire, and fire exhausted falls back into things. -Heraclitus Seek out...
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Take Two. Thanks to anyone who might be reading this.
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Hi, Nick. I'm glad you put this back up; I'd read it once before it vanished, and wanted to read it again. Now I have, several times, but I don't know that I have much to say. My knowledge of the...
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Thanks as always for reading, Chelle. I'll leave the bulk of your questions alone for awhile (in hopes that others will respond before I go explaining everything). I will say that both of the Yeats...
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I don't quite know why you're disgruntled, Nick. The recycling is bound to happen, but is it really such a bad thing. I've bathed in the waters of other poets. What poet hasn't? It bothers me more...
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Mike, As always, the crit is much appreciated. You're right about the rhymes. As for the crown, I was just trying to pick it up this time around. Never having tried a villanelle before this, only now...
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Nick, (I can't get through to your message. Some technical hitch.) I hadn't recognised the Yeats, to my shame. It all makes far more sense. I still have to rationalise the two syllable "fire" but...
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Thanks, Janet. Alas, I've thrown the piece itself into the fire already. It was an exercise, and it'll stay so. Thanks again. Nick
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